In the midterm of writing a paragraph. Before I read English Grammar examples of writing paragraphs and to use.
When I started to do a test, I am very confused about my opinion. I wrote a few incorrect and tension tests.
I believe I can make it. But I try to make it carefully.
Your writing is good but it is too short. You use easy vocabulary and make me understand.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you. We can do it.
ReplyDeleteIt is short essay but it is good.
ReplyDeleteplease check.
.......of paragraph writing and how to use.
I am very confusing or I was very confused.
Sorry I was very confused, It is correct.
DeleteBecause you write in past tense.
DeleteThis story is good but short.Hope you get many points.
ReplyDeleteYou should to have more content and organization in your writing. Because it make your story is more interesting.
ReplyDeletePlease think about the timeline every time you write the story.
ReplyDeleteDon't forget to use past tense in some sentence such as I am,don't forget to change am to was.
I think in some sentences you wrote dissonant subject so,it might make the reader confusing.
Please check carefully and try to write more details.